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ONdross



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PostSubject: The Curious Case of Benjamin Jackson   The Curious Case of Benjamin Jackson EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 1:43 pm

Okay so last time when I went to this girls house not much happened, it was just awkward. Here is where the action comes into play.

After we've been there screwing around for a few minutes, we hear "Put your hands up!"
Her sister freaks out and thinks I am a criminal, so she runs away. The cops start talking to my friends, but I go hide. The "family" in the shed is a mafia meeting. They come out and start shooting. They take my friends hostage. Meanwhile, the sister's boyfriend is crying. The cops think we were part of the family. Everyone is very confused and scared.
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maryshelley



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PostSubject: Re: The Curious Case of Benjamin Jackson   The Curious Case of Benjamin Jackson EmptyFri Oct 23, 2009 9:38 am

write this summary in scenes w full character development; get to work Ondross!
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