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ONdross



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PostSubject: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:25 am

I got to a party really late one night. I had invited this girl that I liked but I had not stayed in touch with her. Since she lived nearby, I decided to walk to her house. A few friends of mine were getting drunk and were really enthusiastic about me hanging out with this girl. On the way to her house, I ran into a group of people who where going to the beach. I went to the beach with them for about twenty minutes, and then returned to the party. I was a little disoriented and tired at this point, so I wanted to drink some caffeine and be at my best to go woo my woman. My friends were not happy that I came back alone. I tried to explain, but they pushed me out the door, and I took the encouragement. They followed me to her house and when we got there, they decided to hide in her shed. What I knew, and they didn't, was that her family was playing cards in her shed. I knocked the girls window quietly to see if she was awake. My drunk friends were cussing at her family and yelling at me do go for it. I was going to knock a little louder when my friend ran up and slammed on the window. I laughed and waited for an answer but none came. After a minute or so, my friend came and slammed on the window again. I figured no one was in there so I started to walk away. This girl's family was getting very alarmed at the drunk people running around their shed at this point. Finally, after about 3 minutes of our quiet and then suddenly very LOUD knocking, the girl's older sister's boyfriend opens the window in a rage. I saw her sister putting her clothes on. Oops. They asked what the hell I could want so badly at 2 in the morning that I was banging on the window for 3 minutes. They thought I was alone and crazy.
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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:27 am

What if this were the opening to a hilarious pornographic film you once saw in a French theater, while studying to be a film major?
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Aaron J. Greenberg



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:28 am

What if all the humans in this story were mice?
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Foundry H The



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:29 am

What if you were African American?
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Aaron J. Greenberg



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:30 am

minus the American?
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Alis grave nil, pax



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:31 am

What if the girl had answered?
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Wolfking



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:32 am

What if your friends joined in the card games in the shed? Why was the family even playing cards in the shed?

What if you saw the girl you wanted to be with getting dressed and another guy in there?

What if they called the cops?

You don't remember anything but you're awake in their shed, the right leg of your pants is missing, there's some unopened beer next to you. You roll over and see the girl's sister. Someone opens the door.
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MANN



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:33 am

What if the girl was actually a boy?
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Moonbeam



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:35 am

What if the same things happened, but nobody was drunk?
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Foundry H The



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:36 am

What if Moonbeam was there?
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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:36 am

What if Moonbeam was the girl?
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Foundry H The



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:39 am

What if I love faceboo
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your father



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:43 am

what if moonbean was the girl who was actually a boy?
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Foundry H The



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:45 am

What if I told you this is your last chance? After this, there is no turning back. You take the blue pill - the story ends, you wake up in your bed and believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill - you stay in Wonderland and I show you how deep the rabbit-hole goes.
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Moonbeam



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:48 am

What if somebody else had registered to this forum as "moonbeam"?
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Aaron J. Greenberg



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:49 am

What if Jean Applebottom was in this story?
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Foundry H The



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:53 am

What if I'd fight Gandhi?
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Foundry H The



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PostSubject: Re: Andre's event   Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:07 pm

what if there was something really scary in the girl, not just AIDS?
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